tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503748290690936207.post1848216741819711806..comments2024-03-14T16:57:36.002-04:00Comments on The Musings of a Book Addict: Student SaturdaySandra Stileshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05028361723666419462noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503748290690936207.post-32755620138588650732010-05-11T20:30:48.355-04:002010-05-11T20:30:48.355-04:00Go gurl! Can't wait to hear the rest at school...Go gurl! Can't wait to hear the rest at school! (hint, hint)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503748290690936207.post-6889129194898286392010-03-23T07:29:45.319-04:002010-03-23T07:29:45.319-04:00Hello I am That 6th grade student.I have updated m...Hello I am That 6th grade student.I have updated my story and may post it later... <br />Thank-You for the suggestions!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503748290690936207.post-83947854905476231222010-03-15T18:35:51.858-04:002010-03-15T18:35:51.858-04:00This item belonged to a 6th grade student I see fo...This item belonged to a 6th grade student I see for two hours on Wednesday in my after school creative writing class. She has been co-writing a novel with another student since the end of fifth grade. They have both decided that they need to work on their own things. The other little girls writings are all very dark. Her friend says there are home problems and this is how she deals with it. Not sure if that is good or bad.Sandra Stileshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028361723666419462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503748290690936207.post-70250276111885806052010-03-15T11:28:48.414-04:002010-03-15T11:28:48.414-04:00Wow, interesting beginning - definitely grabs your...Wow, interesting beginning - definitely grabs your attention! <br /><br />One question I would want answered in the next chapters is; if LuAnne was that volatile when Elizabeth was 3, what has kept her from seriously harming Elizabeth also? I would also like to see the part where the father is trying to calm the mother down stretched out a little more - see if you can give us more of an idea of his tone of voice, how he switches from defending Elizabeth to soothing her mother. Where is Elizabeth during the bear hug? How does it make her feel?<br /><br />You have a great start! I hope you will share the rest of it with us as you go on!Three Turtles and Their Pet Librarianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14097199417023865939noreply@blogger.com