Friday, November 11, 2016

Bitter Moon by Alexandra Sokoloff


Genre: Adult, Thriller
Source: I received a copy to facilitate my review. The opinions expressed here are my own.

Bitter Moon is the fourth book in the Huntress series.  In this series we have an FBI agent named Matthew Roarke who has spent a large amount of time tracking down a woman named Cara Lindstrom. Cara goes after the most evil of predators, as she was once a victim herself. However, nothing condones murder. The biggest problem for Roarke is he finds himself stuck between doing his job and his admiration for Cara. This makes Roarke take a leave of absence. 

When Cara escapes Matthew Roarke goes back on the hunt. This time he uncovers the very thing that set Cara on this path. This will take him back to her old high school and more brutality than he could imagine.

One thing that made this book so great to me is the very thing some people might not like. The author uses alternating chapters to go back in time to show us how Cara became the person she is today, and then chapters to show us present time with Matthew Roarke trying to uncover Cara’s past. This is a sixteen year spread. I felt that this was probably the very best way to tell this story. It is what has made me fall in love all over again with the story line.  Learning what you do about Cara’s past makes a part of you really like her, even though a part of you can’t condone what she has done.

If you haven’t read the first three books in the series, you really must. It will explain things you really need to know to make this book an outstanding one to read. However, having said that, it reads well as a stand alone book.  This one had a lot more emotional backdrop. The reader is given a look at the social system from Cara’s point of view. Unfortunately it really mirrors a lot of today’s system. As I have said before, any book that can make me feel such a range of emotions is a book I will definitely recommend to my readers. Don’t walk, run to get your copy. You won’t regret it.  I think one reason I loved this series is because it kind of reminded me of the Dexter series that was on television years ago. It was probably my favorite series because it showed someone deeply scarred seeking revenge on those he saw as evil.

You can read my review of the other books in the series and a guest post by the author by clicking below.


Monday, November 7, 2016

Guest Post: Maria Grazia Swan Author of Gemini Moon



Fiction versus reality.
I’m often asked where I get my ideas for the stories I write. What can I say? From everyday life. And not just ideas, objects and locations also.
Take my Lella York Mysteries series, let’s compare some of her everyday items with my own, past and present. 
Her car; she drives a Mustang. For years I drove a silver Mustang with custom paint job on the hood. The young men at the car wash would argue for the fun of taking the car through the wash. It was that cool. Later on I traded it in for a 2 door black Infiniti, but that's another story...
Her townhouse. Yes, I'm describing the gated complex I lived at while in Dana Point. Common garage and even the views. Eventually I moved south.

Mission San Juan Capistrano. I was a volunteer there for a couple of years, and did everything Lella describes...including answering the phones on Swallows day.

Flash the cat? The name of my black cat was...Cat. RIP.

All the restaurants and places named in the book are real. Some are now gone, like the bar where Lella first met Ruby. Quiet cannon is now called Cannons, and my beloved Sarducci moved from across the Mission to the train depot.
But don’t take my word for it…read the books and then you’ll have a good reason to visit Orange County, the old Mission and the wonderful beaches from San Clemente to the South to Seal Beach to the North. Believe me, you’ll be happy you did.


Author Bio
Award winning author Maria Grazia Swan was born in Italy, but has also lived in Belgium, France, Germany, in beautiful Orange County, California where she raised her family. She is currently at home in Phoenix, Arizona.

As a young girl, her vivid imagination predestined her to be a bestselling author. She won her first literary award at the age of fourteen while living in Belgium. As a young woman Maria returned to Italy designing haute couture. Once in the U.S. and after years of concentrating on family, she tackled real estate. These days her time is devoted to her deepest passions: writing and helping people and pets find the perfect home.

Maria loves travel, opera, good books, hiking, and intelligent movies (if she can find one, that is). When asked about her idea of a perfect evening, she favors stimulating conversation, Northern Italian food and perfectly chilled Prosecco.


Wednesday, November 2, 2016

Guest Post by Gino B. Bardi Author of "The Cow in the Doorway"




            Quick! What’s more important? The story or how well it’s written? 
No, the correct answer isn’t ‘both.’ our goal as writers and storytellers is, indeed, ‘a good story well told.’ Bear with me now, I'm not dissin' anybody's writing ability, but I'll argue till closing time (and the car is about to be towed away) that a terrific story line gets the nod over great writing ability.
 A compelling and unique plot, with terrific conflict and a strong resolution, will have your reader weeping in despair when they arrive at the dreaded words “The End.” That story will be remembered far longer than a weak or predictable one, no matter how well the wordsmithing is done. Yes, there are examples of brilliantly executed but humdrum plots that achieve an audience. But there are far more with blockbuster plot lines, yet barely credible characters and believable dialogue. The authors of those novels and screenplays are sipping boat drinks on a tropical island while the rest of us criticize them and complain “I coulda done it better.”
And maybe we coulda. But a little advance planning on the story structure woulda been a great idea.

            I wrote a few novels before I tackled one I thought was worth a damn. I had a general idea of the plot...up to a point. Some of it had actually happened. As soon as I left the realm of what happened and had to actually make stuff up, I got unmoored, like a hot air balloon floating with the wind. The story had gotten away from me. I tried to make up for the lost story line by continually rewriting and improving the way I told the story.  The characters realized that no one was steering the ship and mutinied. They fought over who was the protagonist. They lied to each other. They started drinking and fighting.
             The 80,000-word story I had planned grew by half. All this extra writing was good stuff- it just didn't advance the PLOT. What plot? It took the story down one-way streets and forced me to edit and delete. I had to rip out stuff I loved--some of my favorite descriptions and dialogue. It was heartbreaking. But that stuff should never have been written in the first place.
 There must be a better way.  I found it at the library's "fill a bag for a quarter" sale. One bag was filled with Reader's Digest Condensed books. I had never read one. I'd heard about them, of course, but the whole concept was silly. Maybe not.
             Someone had managed to take a full-length novel and squeeze it into a few thousand words. At that size, the plot moved with lightning speed and was brilliantly clear and understandable. Would the concept work in reverse? Could I take my novel idea, and instead of just charging ahead, could I tell the whole story, first, in a short form...with all the major plot points, the central conflict, most important dialogue, and the resolution? Could I write my own private version of a Reader’s Digest Condensed Book, without meandering into all the subplots and self-indulgent scenes that I like writing way more than the meat-and-potatoes plot? Could I stay focused and just write THE STORY?
What an exercise! I had no plans to show it to anyone, not even my writers' group. No one swooned at my writing ability because no one heard it but me. In its  concentrated version I quickly discovered what was right with the story and what wasn't. When I threw out pages,  they were, in fact, 'pages.' They weren't stacks of sheets that I had poured my heart into. I learned to write quickly. I spent less than a page on each chapter. I ignored spelling and grammar mistakes. I skipped the research...what difference does it make on what date or what street something happened? I could find that stuff later. I kept going until I had told the story.
My condensed book was about 2500 words, way longer than any synopsis, nothing at all like an outline, shorter than any novella. It was my novel, in miniature. By compressing the story, the faults in the plot line became obvious. The essential characteristics, good or bad, of the theme, conflict, and resolution stood in high relief. I had plenty of stuff to fix, but that was okay; I hadn't spent months tearing these pages out of my soul only to throw them away.
It was easy to do. I made the fixes and then started at the beginning, writing carefully, concerned now with the flow and the language. I knew the hard work was done. In the end, I got the best plot I could make along with the best writing I was capable of.  The 'writing part' was easy. We can all do the writing part. That's because we're writers, right?


Author Bio
Gino B. Bardi was born in New York City in 1950, and lived on the South Shore of Long Island until he attended Cornell University in 1968, during the tumultuous era of Vietnam War protests. Armed with a degree in English/Creative Writing, he diligently sought work in his field and soon wound up doing everything but. For the next forty-four years he cranked out advertising copy, magazine articles, loan pitches and short stories while running a commercial printing company in Upstate New York. Along the way, he married his college girlfriend, became father to three lovely daughters and decided that winter was an unnecessary evil. In 2008 he sold the printing business, retired, and now writes humorous fiction in his home on the Gulf Coast of Florida. Two signs hang above his desk: "Bad decisions make good stories," and Mel Brooks' advice that "You only need to exaggerate a LITTLE BIT."

The Cow in the Doorway is his first full-length novel and won the statewide Royal Palm Literary Award for best unpublished New Adult novel for 2015.
LinkedIn:  Gino Bardi
Skype:  gino.bardi
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The Short Seller by Elissa Brent Weissman





Genre: Middle Grade, Realistic Fiction
Source: Purchased

My love of this author’s work started with the book “Standing for Socks”. I read this when I was a Middle Grades judge for Cybils in 2009.  I have read her Nerd Camp Books and loved them as well. I had no thoughts of not liking this book.  As I thought, I loved it.  Lindy Sachs, the main character of the book is a very lovable character. Lindy is like so many people, including myself, who struggled with math in school. When she comes down with mononucleosis and must stay home from school she is bored. Her parents hire a tutor for her so she doesn’t get further behind in her least favorite subject. She does a favor for her dad by helping him purchase some stock, since he can’t access the site from work. As he explains it to her she becomes interested enough that he fronts her one hundred dollars to buy and sell stock on her own.  She becomes even more interested when she learns her new tutor used to be a trader. They have that in common. She begins to understand math better the more she works the market. Like others who have found that a little bit of money isn’t enough, Lindy falls into that trap. One wrong move in the stock market, one bad and illegal decision has both her and her father in hot water.


I really can’t wait for my students to get their hands on this book. It is fun, funny, and full of enough adventure to keep you on the edge of your seat reading until the end.  Once again I highly recommend this book to young and old alike.

Sunday, October 30, 2016

Nerd Camp Briefs: Nikhil and the Geek Retreat by Elissa Brent Weissman


Genre: Middle Grade Realistic Fiction
Source: I purchased this book

I enjoyed this small book as much as the first two.  Nikhil is looking forward to weekend camp at the Center for Gifted Enrichment, with one exception. His younger sister Monishah will be going with him. He has no choice. If things don't work out and his sister gets into trouble then he won't be able to go to summer camp. He will be forced to stay at home and babysit his sister. The problem is that his sister is constantly in trouble. She does crazy things such as sliding down the stairs on her duvet cover. Nikhil enlists the help of his camp friends to keep an eye on his sister. Things take a different turn and Nikhil learns that he and his "crazy" sister aren't that different after all.  This was a wonderful book. You could feel the tension Nikhil felt trying to make sure his sister didn't get them kicked out.   This is a very short and quick read yet is so full of adventure. My students will love this one as much as they loved the first two. I can't wait to tell them about it.

Friday, October 28, 2016

Guest Post by Carl Brookins



More Random Musings from a writer.
On the second hottest day of the summer, I opened an email query. Essentially, the writer wanted to know how one of my plots had surfaced. I told him the truth. I couldn’t remember precisely, so I temporized. Now, new plot ideas are flitting around.
So far, we’ve had a hot and fruitful summer and now the days are shorter, rainy and colder. Is it out of the ordinary? I don’t actually know. We seem to have attracted more birds than usual. Not long ago I observed two hummingbirds, flying wing to wing like fighter planes in formation. They roared in across the yard like a scene from one of those old black and white films about dog fights during WWII. I was about to duck when they diverted and whisked away overhead. Impossible to follow against the hot blue sky. I think they were checking out the feeders, although I don’t expect to find hummers at the seed feeders. Impertinent little buggers.
I sometimes like to read, relaxing on our deck. One day I glanced up from the page to find a humming bird hovering about a foot from my forehead. I am not hummingbird food. Did the bird want me to read it a story? No hawks so far this summer, so when I sit outside in the heat to read, the critters, aloft and underfoot show up. It isn’t me that attracts them, it’s the seed and old bread. When the popcorn I supply to my writers’ critique group grows stale, I cast small handfuls on our deck and lo, overnight it is gone. Rabbits.
Crows sometimes visit. Since they are shy or skittish, we rarely see them up close. Crows are fierce-looking creatures. It is fun to watch them maneuver about the yard. First one or two sail silently to perch up in the big pine. After a few minutes of observing the many cardinals, finches, sparrows and woodpeckers in the yard, one makes a pass over the deck, scattering the smaller birds to the bushes and sending chipmunks and red squirrels under cover. The lead crow lands and struts about, picking up corn and sunflower seeds. It lifts its head, eyes me through the glass of the sliding door and calls. Its companion, waiting in the tree, repeats the call. There is a raucous response from overhead and suddenly a dozen of the big black, sharp-eyed avians are all over the yard, the trees, the grass, the deck. Noisy, strutting, picking at seeds, flowers, grubs and worms in the long grass. And overhead, maybe two hundred feet in the air a black crow circles, silently, watching. It is obviously looking for danger. Two days ago I went into the yard to move some trash to the compost. A crow high overhead began to cry. The calls went on for the entire time I was in the yard, at least twenty minutes. I wonder if the crows ever get hoarse.\ Time passes. The lookout notices something. What, I don’t know. These are urban crows, used to traffic and close human interactions. The circling crow dips a wing, sends out a loud call, and the dark flock rises almost as a single creature and swiftly departs for places unseen. Plot points abound.
I recall some of our encounters with gulls on the seas and lakes where we sailed. It was not unusual for a gull to roost on the gunwale or cabin of our sailboat for several minutes as we went along, hitching a ride for a time.
The crows will be back, and meanwhile, the populace of smaller birds and the unwinged return to their feast. The scene suggests a story plot. I noodle it a bit and make a note for reference. A robin, thrashing about in a basin, reminds me it’s time to refresh the birdbaths.
Now, fall has descended and the days are shorter, colder and at times more depressing. But winter with sparkling crisp snow and ice will soon appear, and the cycle will renew. Its time to start a new book.

Author Bio
Before he became a mystery writer and reviewer, Carl Brookins was a counselor and faculty member at Metropolitan State University in Saint Paul, Minnesota. Brookins and his wife are avid recreational sailors. He is a member of Mystery Writers of America, Sisters in Crime, and Private Eye Writers of America. He can frequently be found touring bookstores and libraries with his companions-in-crime, The Minnesota Crime Wave.

He writes the sailing adventure series featuring Michael Tanner and Mary Whitney. The third novel is Old Silver. His new private investigator series features Sean NMI Sean, a short P.I. The first is titled The Case of the Greedy Lawyers. Brookins received a liberal arts degree from the University of Minnesota and studied for a MA in Communications at Michigan State University.
http://www.carlbrookins.com/
@carlbrookins

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Come and enjoy a time of conversation with author Carl Brookins as he talks about translating his sailing adventures to fiction and creating fictional characters that feel like old friends. Brookins is a member of Mystery Writers of America, Sisters in Crime, and Private Eye Writers of America. He can frequently be found touring bookstores and libraries with his companions-in-crime, The Minnesota Crime Wave.

Wednesday, October 19, 2016

Edge the Bare Garden by Roseanne Chen


Genre: Young Adult, Realistic Fiction
Source: I received a copy from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review. The opinions expressed here are my own.


My Thoughts
Agnes has never fit in. She has accepted this. She is bullied. When she finally reaches her breaking point, she takes matters into her own hands. She starts a blog where she starts telling secrets she knows about those who have tormented her. However, as things usually happen, things get out of hand. I would start the reading of this book by asking my students to answer the question; is it ever okay to seek revenge? What are some possible consequences of taking matters into your own hands?

I have decided to promote this throughout my school. This is a book that needs to be in each of my department’s classroom. As a middle grade English teacher I definitely could see this happening to any of my students. I have seen some of the things they post online to each other. It is so easy to be so nasty to each other. Teens today don’t consider it is the same as walking up to that person and saying it to their face. The major difference is that online, it is open for anyone and everyone to see. It becomes very public. They detach themselves from what they have written.  I understand why Agnes did what she did. However, I think she could have handled things differently. Once something is out there online, you can’t take it back.  This comes with questions in the back which help out the teacher.  Every parent should read this with their child or along with them to facilitate those all important discussions.

Monday, October 10, 2016

Guest Post: Clyde Linsley

“Tinkering” with History
I was in a large bookstore a few months ago and had one of those unfortunate experiences that are commonplace among us “midlist” authors. (“Midlist” is, incidentally, a common euphemism in the publishing business; it’s a relatively nice way to say “bottom of the pecking order, and apparently it applies to everyone who has had a book published but who cannot retire in luxury from the proceeds.)
In other words: nearly all of us.
We who reside on the midlist are doomed to haunting the bookstore aisles in search of prospective readers who seem to be searching for reading matter, with an eye toward enticing them into picking up our latest effort and, perhaps, falling in love with it. It happens just often enough to raise our hopes and fails to happen just enough to plunge us into despair.
She followed me eagerly as I led her to the books that had my name on them.
“I think my books might interest you,” I said. “I wrote a number of books with historical settings, mostly American and mostly set before the Civil War. My protagonist is a New England lawyer, a friend of Andrew Jackson, who . . .”
“Oh, I don’t care for historicals,” she said. “I want a nice murder mystery!” And off she went.
Um. Well.
By the time I had formulated a suitable response, she was gone. I’m still unsure that I would have come up with a suitable response, but it seemed appropriate at the time. I’d be interested in what – if anything – I might have said. In any event, I doubt that it would have mattered.
This wasn’t the first time I’ve come up against this objection. Readers of cozies (as traditional mysteries are sometimes characterized) seem to think historicals lack the requisite romance element, as if the whole boy-girl thing began with Rock Hudson and Doris Day. Readers of romances apparently believe that historical mysteries produce an insufficient number of ripped bodices.
Of course, murder is a fact of life today, as it was in the past. Regardless of what we may believe about the “rightness” of it, murder happened, and it happened frequently.
The fact is that we are all to some extent the products of our previous thoughts and actions. And not only our thoughts and actions.
 Everyone’s past is our present. As an example, I present to you the subject of my current book, the Mississippi River.
The Mississippi River: native Americans called it the “Father of Waters.” It served the youthful United States as a major transportation artery in a time before the existence of railroads, aircraft and Interstate highways. It fostered territorial expansion, watered any number of farms, and developed international trade. It also led to the development of steam-powered railroads and riverboats and made the United States a major exporter of agricultural commodities.
But Americans are tinkerers by disposition, and we couldn’t leave well-enough alone. We took over the river and systematically “improved” it by removing logjams, deepening channels, and straightening many of the river’s twists and turns – in the service of efficiency.
In the process, we very nearly destroyed it. We didn’t foresee the inevitable consequences of our efforts, which would have been disastrous for New Orleans – not to mention for the millions of people who depended on the river for their livelihood.  
The Army Corps of Engineers recognized the problem, fortunately, and cobbled together a solution that has held the river in check for half a century. But it’s only a temporary solution, and it could easily be reversed. My new book, Old River, is a fictional conjecture about an attempt to do just that.  I think (he said modestly) that, in telling a fictional story. it explains the problem and the possible consequences of inaction.
Old River, as I said, is fiction. But it could be fact with a little bit of tinkering. And Americans – as I believe I’ve said – are tinkerers.



Author Bio:

Clyde Linsley was born 1942 in Little Rock, Arkansas. He graduated from Little Rock Central High School in 1960 (at the height of the desegregation controversy). Linsley attended Little Rock University (one year), then transferred to the University of Missouri. There, he received a Bachelor of Journalism degree from the Missouri School of Journalism in 1964. That was followed by two years of graduate study in theology and social ethics at Colgate Rochester Divinity School where he didn’t get a degree but gained interesting knowledge and significant expenses and considered it worth every penny.

When asked what inspires his writing, Clyde quotes a favorite writer:

William Faulkner wrote that the past isn’t irrelevant, and that it is “not even past.” As a Southerner who has lived most of his adult life in the east, I keep finding the past encroaching on the present, wherever I go. If there is a single theme to my books, it’s probably that what happens tomorrow is directly related to what happened yesterday. Europeans are probably more aware of this, because they have so much more history, but it’s just as true on this side of the pond.”

Most of his stories have echoes from the past.
After school, he worked on state and national political campaigns, two presidential inaugurations, and wrote radio news for a small New Hampshire broadcaster. He was also a reporter for a (now defunct) daily newspaper, a freelance writer and a mystery novelist. Clyde is married with three offspring (now adults) and lives with his wife in the Virginia suburbs of Washington, DC.

Monday, October 3, 2016

Guest Post by Judy Alter author of The Gilded Cage


Research After the Fact

For the last ten years, give or take a little, I worked on a historical novel about Chicago. It was my “big” project, often set aside for shorter, less puzzling work. But I’m a believer in letting things simmer in the back of your mind—and I was convinced this was simmering. In between other projects, I’d go back and fiddle with the manuscript I then called “Potter’s Wife.” I’d change the point of view—Potter Palmer, Cissy Palmer, omniscient third-person, Most of all I’d research.
I ordered books on interlibrary loan as if there were a desperate hurry and the service would not be available the next day. I read everything I could find about Chicago history, Potter and Bertha (Cissy) Honoré Potter, the Columbian Exposition, the Great Fire of Chicago, architecture. I spent hours online.

I’d write, put it aside, rewrite, go on to a mystery, etc. One of my big breakthroughs came when a first line popped into my head. “The smell. He’d never forget the smell.” I had the tone I wanted, and the actual writing came fairly easily. Satisfied that I had followed all loose threads and tied them up, I sent “Potter’s Wife” to my editor. Somewhere along the way it became “The Gilded Cage.” I sent it to a formatter and hired a dear friend to do the jacket design (original art now hangs, framed, in my cottage).

Mid-May last spring, the book went live on Amazon in trade paper and ebook, garnering mostly five-star reviews, sales that for me were good, and flattering comments from those who read it immediately. Then I discovered a whole new research source I had no idea about and now wonder how I missed.



Author Bio
An award-winning novelist, Judy Alter is the author of several fictional biographies of women of the American West. In The Gilded Cage she has turned her attention to the late nineteenth century in her home town, Chicago, to tell the story of the lives of Potter and Cissy Palmer, a high society couple with differing views on philanthropy and workers’ right. She is also the author of six books in the Kelly O’Connell Mysteries series. With the 2014 publication of The Perfect Coed, she introduced the Oak Grove Mysteries.

Her work has been recognized with awards from the Western Writers of America, the Texas Institute of Letters, and the National Cowboy Museum and Hall of Fame. She has been honored with the Owen Wister Award for Lifetime Achievement by WWA and inducted into the Texas Literary Hall of Fame and the WWA Hall of Fame. http://judyalter.com/



Skype: juju1938

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Sunday, October 2, 2016

Linda and Mary by Molly Rainier


Genre: Adult, Realistic Fiction
Source: I received a copy to facilitate my review. The opinions expressed here are my own.

From Goodreads
A cave woman appears on a fire escape in Brooklyn in 1967, a time when nothing seen on the street or in the news is surprising anymore. It's a time of sit ins and love ins, of mini skirts, tie dyes and Afros. The Vietnam war. As Mary Polleti, housewife, watches a storm rolling in over Flatbush, she sees the woman huddled outside her kitchen window and reaches out to her. This is the beginning of an unlikely, tender friendship between two women and the opportunity that opens up to Mary that she could never have imagined possible. With Linda as catalyst, the story carries on to an unexpected resolution. Sometimes comic, sometimes tragic, it's a story about women, and for women. 

My Thoughts

The book was well written. However, it was not a book that I really enjoyed. I know there are those out there who will enjoy it. I had trouble following the storyline. I understood that this was a look at how women were viewed in the 60s. I felt that in a way it was a little degrading of men.  Mary seemed to be quite a bit like her mother. I felt the book was a little depressing and negative. That may be why I didn’t care for it. Would I recommend it? Yes, I know there is an audience out there. This was just not the book for me.   I do believe the author is a great future in front of her. She writes well.