Wednesday, October 4, 2023

Guest Post: Kandi J. Wyatt: Six Key Elements to Writing a Story


Kandi J. Wyatt

Any time I can get an author to write a post that I can share with not only you my readers, but also my students, it is a win-win. I asked Kandi to write about writing. So many out there are curious about how to get started. Here are Kandi's Six Key Elements for Writing.

Writing a story is something that takes time and patience. There isn’t a magic formula that makes a tale unique and special. The originality comes from the writer diving into their own experiences and sharing in story form the truths they learned. However, there are some key elements to have in place for writing.

1.      Consistency

As you write, you want to do it on a consistent basis. That means every day for some people. For others, it might be every Tuesday at 9 pm. Whatever it is for you, make sure you have planned writing time and that it’s held sacred. Don’t let the normal everyday distract you from writing. An emergency here or there is okay, but don’t make everything into an emergency.

2.      Practice

Like consistency, practice is key to improving your craft. The more you write, the easier it’ll come. When I first wrote in high school, I wasn’t consistent nor did I do a lot of writing. But later, when I started writing for publication, I wrote more and each story progressively got better.

3.      Listen to experts

Editors and other writers will know the craft of writing. Listen to them. But be careful. Not all editors are who you need. Take for example my story Journey from Skioria. I’d originally written it to have the style of The Secret Garden in third person omniscient. The editor I found read the first snippet and returned the manuscript with an ebook of her own. I was to read the book and change my manuscript to fit her style. I should have stuck to my guts and found a different editor.

That being said, I’ve found the best editor for me. She works with me and my stories to bring out the best in my books and in me. As I write, I’m now hearing her voice instructing and warning me on problem areas. That makes my writing better in the long run.

4.      Learn from others

This may be similar to number 3, but it’s with the idea of training. All athletes train for their sport. They go to camps and learn. The same is true of writers. Go to conferences and learn from the speakers. My go-to conference is Realm Makers. It’s every July and often they have a winter retreat option. They even have a teen track in the summer for kids to learn to hone their craft.

Read books on the craft. Anne Lamott’s Bird by Bird, Steven James’ Story Trumps Structure, Terry Brooks’ Sometimes the Magic Works, or Madeleine L’Engle’s Walking on Water are all good to read and learn from. Another book, not quite on the craft of writing but on creating is Allen Arnold’s Chaos Can’t. (In reality any of his books—The Story of With, Waves of Creativity, and The Eden Option—are excellent.)

5.      Read in your genre

The best way to improve your writing is by reading the type of books you want to write. Since I’m publishing two to three books a year, I don’t have much free time, but I can read at lunch, listen to books on the way to work and home, and there’s even a few minutes before going to bed. Reading for enjoyment enables you to absorb the things you love about a book or author’s style. When that happens, you’ll find those things will begin to naturally make their way into your books.

For me, it was H. L. Burke’s books that brought the light romance into my series Four Stars over Ardatz: Sovereigns. I loved how it wasn’t the main plot of her books, but it came naturally. I read many of her books (I’m way behind on her superhero universe) and the romance became a natural part of my own series.

6.      Live Life to its Fullest

The best way to write is to live life and have experiences that you can draw upon. My first story I wrote that actually worked was written after my first year in college. I’d come home to earn money to go back to school the next semester. My job was in a mall at a cinnamon roll shop. I wrote my sister, our friend group, and my boyfriend into a mystery around the mall. It was probably cheesy and amateurish, but I wrote it. In reality, it was a stepping stone to my later published works. I could say I’d finished a full story. It wasn’t novel length, but it was a complete story.

So, go out there. Live life, read, learn, and grow. Then write. Write to your heart’s content. Never give up. Never allow someone else to tell you that you can’t. You can

Tuesday, October 3, 2023

Divided by Kandi J. Wyatt - Cover Reveal





Cover Design – by Kandi J. Wyatt
Release day – November 14, 2023
Divided buy link - https://books2read.com/sovereigns6


16-year-old Mairead longs to be an ordinary princess and love a prince. But the Prince of Lochlann wants more than her love, and he’ll do what he must to strip her magic from her.

Also, Books 1-2 in the series, Uprooted and Blessed will be on sale for $0.99 from 10/2-10/8.

Uprooted - https://books2read.com/sovereigns1

Blessed - https://books2read.com/sovereigns2Come back tomorrow for a guest post from the author.

Blurb:

Finding magic or finding love? Can both exist for 16-year-old Mairead?

Orphaned, thrust into the throne, and now mysterious and mystical things are happening within her. Mairead is overwhelmed. When Prince Lysander requests a diplomatic visit, Mairead feels a pull to say yes, despite the warnings from her council.

As her draconic powers awaken, she turns to the prince who understands magic—and her life circumstances. Their lessons soon focus less on learning about this fascinating power and more about their growing attraction for each other.

Although those closest to her grow more suspicious of the prince’s intentions, Mairead can only see the hurt and pain Lysander has experienced and is drawn to the power he exhibits.

A heart is a fragile thing, and first love is never easy. Mairead must decide where her loyalties lie and uncover the prince’s true purpose before she loses far more than the crown her parents fought so hard to establish for her.

Divided is the sixth book in the coming-of-age epic fantasy series: Four Stars over Ardatz: Sovereigns. If you like action, multi-dimensional clean romance, and addictive stories, you’ll love Kandi J Wyatt’s book.

Grab Divided today to finish the adventure!

Come back tomorrow for a guest post from the author.

 

 

Saturday, September 30, 2023

Student Saturday: The Summer I Turned Pretty by Jenny Han

 



Student Reviewer – Madison

Genre: Young Adult, Realistic Fiction

The book “The Summer I Turned Pretty” is about a girl named Betty and her mom and brother, Lauel and Steven. They go to cousins Beach every summer with their family friends, Jeremiah and Conrad. Belly has liked Conrad since she  was little but this summer was different for her with many plot twists. Belly has always been the girl that hasn’t really grown up yet, until this summer when “everything changed”. This book is really good for anybody above the age of twelve who likes to read about teenage life. Jenny Han wrote this book very well and I really recommend reading it.


Monday, September 25, 2023

Easy Target by Tim Shoemaker


Genre: Young Adult, Christian, Realistic Fiction
Source: I own a copy

There is nothing better in my opinion than a book with a great story line that also promotes Christianity.

Tim Shoemaker is a master at crafting such books.  The characters are always relatable.  As a teacher I have seen many homeschooled kids begin regular middle school. For many it is not much of a social jump as they attend church or other activities that have them fitting in socially. Then we have those who have been out of the loop socially and struggle with going to a regular school.

Hudson Sutton is one of the first types of kids. He was homeschooled, raised as a Christian and adjusted fairly well in the school. That is until the bullying starts. He tries to protect his new friends from the bullying going on.  He comes up with a wonderful plan only to realize that he himself has become a bully. Since he is so open about his faith he is like many teens who think they are doing the right thing, only to discover that what they are actually doing is not what God would have us do.  One thing that kept going through my mind was the scripture, “Vengeance is mine, saith the Lord, I will repay.”  I guess a part of me remembers a time that I was so fed up with something that I thought I could help handle it. I then discovered that I had become a part of the same bad decisions. I justified my actions “because I prayed about it.”  There is a difference between praying and actually listening to what God is trying to tell us.  

All of the characters are well developed.  The setting was nicely done. The messages are clear. It is great that Hudson wanted to help his friends with the bullying issue. How far is too far? What happens when the bullied become the bullies?  A great question to end on and a recommendation to read this book. It is so worth is.


 

Saturday, September 23, 2023

Student Saturday: Hotel Magnifique by Emily J. Taylor

 


Genre: Young Adult, Fantasy

Student Reviewer:  Sophia G.


Hotel Magnifique is a fantasy book with elements of mystery that will grab your interest from the beginning and keep you hooked until the end. This book will especially appeal to siblings when they read about Jani and Zosa’s dynamic sibling relationship. Many people will be able to relate to Jani, who is an overprotective, caring, older sister, and Zosa, a younger sister who is coming out of her shell. Together, they explore the magical Hotel Magnifique which has enchantments and secrets to rival Hogwarts. I enjoyed this book not only for the plot, but because I was able to relate to my relationship with my sister.

Tuesday, September 5, 2023

When Stars are Scattered by Victoria Jamieson and Omar Mohamed

 


Genre:  Middle Grade, Biography

Source:  I purchased a copy. The opinions expressed here are my own.

 

This is the second graphic novel I have read that has greatly touched me. Omar and his brother Hassan are victims of the civil war in their country of Somalia. Omar witnesses his father's death. He runs to tell his mother. She thrusts Hassan into his arms and tells him to run. He joins thousands of others running from soldiers. He and his brother end up in a refuge camp in Kenya. Fatuma is their legal guardian, since they have no adults.  This story tells of his life in the refugee camp. The struggles of raising a younger brother who can't speak and has medical issues. It tells of his dream of going to school and making a better life. It tells of the dreams of everyone in the camp, dreaming of leaving the camps one day.  This is not an easy book to read. One of my students told me I HAD to read it. Before I could check it in and take it home another kids said, "I want to read it." So, I did what every good teacher would do, who wants to make readers of their students, I checked it out to him. I purchased my own copy to read this weekend. I am glad I did. We who live here in the land of the free have no right to complain when we read books like this. Our lives are so easy compared to the many refugees in camps all over the world.  This is a definite must read.


Monday, September 4, 2023

Sunshine by Jarrett J. Krosoczka

 




Genre: Middle Grade, Graphic Novel, Realistic Fiction
Source: I purchased a copy. The opinions expressed here are my own.



I am not a real big reader of graphic novels. However, as part of my classroom challenge with my students I had to read a graphic novel. I chose this one because I had read his former book, "Hey Kiddo". I enjoyed this book even more and can't wait for my students to read it.  This is the author's true story of a year in high school when he worked at a summer camp for students who had cancer.  The way he was able to inspire those he worked with was amazing. What was more amazing was the way these kids inspired and changed his life.  It is not an easy book to read due to the topic. I found myself moved to tears throughout the book. The author doesn't sugar coat things, not even his own tough life. He was raised by his grandparents. The reasons can be found by reading this book.  I highly recommend it

Monday, August 28, 2023

The Poet X by Elizabeth Acevedo

 



Genre: Young Adult, Novel in Verse
Source: I own a copy

This was an excellent book.  Xiomara and her twin are opposites. Their mother favors "Twin", Xiomara's brother. He goes to a school for the gifted.  Xiomara has spent her entire life looking out for her brother, fighting his battles for him.  How do you survive when it seems no one knows you exist?  you write poetry.  Xiomara's mother speaks limited English. To make matters worse, she never wanted to get married, she wanted to be a nun. This makes life more difficult for Xiomara. She is required to go to confirmation classes. She isn't even sure what she believes about God. She  has ignored the boys who like to make comments about her larger, curvy body.  Aman is the first boy she has given any attention to. But she isn't allowed to do anything except go to church.  She learns about performance poetry from her English teacher, who sees something special in her. She avoids the invitations to join the poetry club because it doesn't fall into line with her mom's church life.  But just because her mom wouldn't agree doesn't mean that she can't write poetry. That is what she does until  her mom takes that away. Something breaks inside and it will take someone her mother trusts to help mend their family.  

I love this book.  I would recommend it to high school students because of some of the more mature themes.


Friday, August 25, 2023

Shadow of the West by Sarah Brotherhood Chapman

 



Genre: Young Adult, Historical Fiction
Source: I won a copy from LibraryThing. The opinions expressed here are my own.

Books about the Cold War have been my favorite for years. Very little is written about it for teens. They know almost nothing. I jumped at the chance to read this book so I could get it into the hands of my students. We have Kate who is. and American. As the daughter of a diplomat she moves a lot. This time they are in West Berlin. She meets Amy, whose father is a diplomat stationed on the east side of Berlin. Amy spends a lot of time at Kate’s house.  Kate goes to visit Amy and meets Michael. Michael and his sister are barely surviving on the east side. Of course Kate and Michael meet. This is dangerous for Michael and his sister as the Stasi watch everything.

I enjoyed this book because the author is the daughter of a diplomat who had similar experiences to that of Kate.  I enjoyed this also because I worked with two teachers and taught their daughter. They would tell me stories of living in embassies around the world, especially Russia.  Their daughter at times was clueless as to how things actually worked in those countries because they were sheltered from a lot of the things people in those country went through, all because they were a diplomat’s child.  I highly recommend this book. I believe it should be on every high school shelf.   I won a copy from LibraryThing’s Early Reviewer Giveaway.


Monday, August 14, 2023

Thirteen Doorways, Wolves Behind Them All by Laura Ruby

 


Genre:  Young Adult, Historical Fiction
Source:  I purchased a copy

I love reading books set in the time period of WWII.  Then you add in a young girl named Frankie and a ghost named Pearl, whose stories alternate and you have the setup for a great book. The thing that really sets this book apart from so many other of this time period is the difference between the treatment of males and females.  There are so many things a female is expected to do just because of her gender. Yet we have a story here to show how strong the female can be and how they rise above the expectations for the time period. We also look at the difference in treatment between those who have money and those who do not.

Frankie is living in an orphanage. The story takes place in America. This surprised me because I figured as a World War 2 book it would have taken place in Europe. However, this was a refreshing detail. Frankie, her sister and brother all live in an orphanage because their mother is dead and their father can’t afford to take care of them.  I got angry at the fact that their father meets another woman, whose children are also in the orphanage, and they get married. The marriage wasn’t the issue. It was the fact their father was moving out west and taking his new wife and her children and their brother with them. The only reason the brother went was because he had aged out of the orphanage. Another unique aspect of this orphanage was the way they separated the boys and girls. Girls were required to take care of the dinner dishes from the boy’s side, but not allowed to talk or acknowledge them without repercussions.  Some of the nuns came across as just looney or sadistic.  The storyline is engaging and kept me reading.  A bonus for me was learning that this is based on the true life story of the author’s Mother-in law.  A strange book, yet engaging. I will say it was difficult in the very beginning to keep the two perspectives straight. If you stick with it, which I say you should, you will soon find yourself so invested you can’t stop reading it.  So glad to have read and recommend this book.